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EDIT: 5/11/2009: Was just notified that this piece won first place in the Short Story Category in Victor Valley College's Writing Contest!
Behold! The first of the pieces for my challenge! (You know, the one I posted here: [link]) The inspiration for this short story came from this image: [link] which was taken by my friend It was originally going to be a piece about a girl who's boyfriend committed suicide by drowning himself in the ocean, but I like the way it evolved into its current incarnation. Enjoy. |
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"why do you wear a bell?"
Grace "my friends perfer me to wear one while I'm in society"
"Why?"
Grace "Why would any one put a bell on a cat?"
"...to keep it from killing Songbirds."
Grace " Exactly!
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When I see you, I smile. When you talk, I'm speechless. When you walk, I stare. What can I say... retards amuse me.
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Youre like our brother.
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"If everything were simple, we'd never know who we are." -from The Swan Arm, by MBryn [link]
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"Writers aren't exactly people...they're a whole lot of people trying to be one person." --F. Scott Fitzgerald.
"Writing is a socially acceptable form of schizophrenia." --E.L. Doctorow.
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The earth moving under me
Bedroom scent, beauty ardent
Distant shiver, heaven sent
~Nightwish--Feel For You
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"Writers aren't exactly people...they're a whole lot of people trying to be one person." --F. Scott Fitzgerald.
"Writing is a socially acceptable form of schizophrenia." --E.L. Doctorow.
It's wonderful, Bryn.
My favorite part was "might be a prayer or might be a curse." I love how you don't distinguish which it is.
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Come on let's touch in that kind of I'm Christ and you're a leper kind of way. ~Noel Fielding
I find your beautiful eyes see right through me, so show me what you want me to be. ~Kevin Max
Thanks for the comment and fave, Val. ^_^
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"Writers aren't exactly people...they're a whole lot of people trying to be one person." --F. Scott Fitzgerald.
"Writing is a socially acceptable form of schizophrenia." --E.L. Doctorow.
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"Writers aren't exactly people...they're a whole lot of people trying to be one person." --F. Scott Fitzgerald.
"Writing is a socially acceptable form of schizophrenia." --E.L. Doctorow.
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"Writers aren't exactly people...they're a whole lot of people trying to be one person." --F. Scott Fitzgerald.
"Writing is a socially acceptable form of schizophrenia." --E.L. Doctorow.
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